well that was a peice of ass hat
How the hell does a fat plumber beat 708mph.
This is what happens when you give ppl freedom of creativity, sprites and a demo ver of flash.
Screw you u f***in communist. I can make whatever I want. Its the whole movie that counts not just one minor setback
i love beebo
what would newgrounds be without pointless crap. Go beebo.
And just remeber it could always be worse, so be thankful.
First thing is crappy shape tweens can be used effectivly. You almost did it. course you didn't bother to add colour.
I'd say this was an unfinished project.
Course if you were to say if was done, i'd say you sucked and had no talent.
Now you say, who am i to say that, i am me, and if you were wondering what colours try cool colours for the movie. by cool i mean, blues, pupurples and greens.
You can do better, so do better.
Half assing it won't get you a five.
what was the point?
there wasn't much to that. It didn't make anysense. I think the only reason its goning to stay alive is becasue you put some work. But then again it was other ppl works, with sprites and all.
It moved me
I'd honestly say this has to be the most moving flash movie ever. I've seen many countless flash animations, and well nothing can really compare to this. It really sends a very clear message across. It shows that we can do alot more with flash. Something with meaning.
I'd like to congradulate you for putting such effort into this movie. I loved it. Even though i've never experanced this, it made me feel there pain.
Ok, well since this is your first submission, i'm not gonna say too much.
You need to work on your visuals, they're lacking at best. Like i say to alot of n00bs you put in more effort than alot of people have done in the past.
For one thing you have a story. Not much of one but its there. The one thing i would deffinatly cut out thou is the crappy computer voices. Either do em youself, or just add some subtitles/speech bubbles. Some of the better stuff don't even have voices.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks, i'll remember all of that.
It was short but sweet
I think your main problem with the file size was the lack of streaming the sound.
In order to do this you set the sync to Stream on the sound toolbox. It sould cut back on some of the file size and will sync up the sound to the animation even on slower comps.
I could be wrong but i think thats the problem.
Otherwise i think it was a really great cartoon, alittle short and not much to the story. But there was deffiantly more effor there than there is in alot of the ng stuff. Therefor i congratulate you.
keep up the good work.
Keep working on it
Its not a bad start, like its been mentioned before vector trace the sprites. Aswell speed up the frame rate. The whole movie runs far to slow.
I realize that your probably new to flash, so i'd suggest checking out some toutorials on Flashkit, if i could remeber the url id put it but i don't sorry.
Next reall biggy is the lack of sounds, and your file size.
Keep up working in flash and you be good in no time. d^_^b
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